I enjoyed all of these, but #9 made me very very happy, right from "If we're going to do this, you have to let me lead," right through Jack's thought that he will not be tamed easily, to all three of them dancing together. I love the dynamic between Nine and Jack and you've captured it beautifully here. And "Bananas?" the Doctor suggested. "No, wait, even I can do that one," made me laugh.